I hope I'm doing this right... fursuit head redline?

This is only my second head, and I'm working on a lion character for my roommate. I was just wondering if I could maybe get a redline or some sort of constructive criticism? I haven't gotten to working on his brow yet, something about his cheek/mouth area is throwing me off. The nose is temporary until my DVC order comes in. I just feel like something is wrong.

Any help is greatly appreciated! ^^;;