Needing some help/advice!~ Deer WIP :D

So I've decided to make myself a 3/4 suit that is supposed to be a white-tail deer/caribou/Chinese water deer hybrid, and I plan to make it a toony balaclava head. Here's a couple of pictures of the head from the front and the side. I am mostly looking for people to give me "redliners" as I have heard it called c: Posting links since it's easier. Apologize for the crappy quality of the pictures. My iPod sucks xD



Front: http://i1132.photobucket.com/albums/m579/wolfgirl2634/95BAE058-E675-4FF5-816F-F7AD1B7679A5-7792-00000E49EEDA8AFE.jpg

Side: http://i1132.photobucket.com/albums/m579/wolfgirl2634/E2ACBE9E-8D67-4CCB-9650-6911878B08DC-7792-00000E49E7D3CC6D.jpg

(You have to copy paste them into your browser >.<)

Thanks guys!