concrit on fursuit head?

hello!! i'd like some constructive criticism on this head in the making:
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so this is the character I'm going for, my OC, nyako (who is a house cat):
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i'm going for a more toony, anime-esque look, and of course for it to look like a house cat.
also do y'all have any tips for more ventilation in this? so far all I've got is the eyes (crinoline fabric) and a tiny space where I can breathe through in the mouth.
thank you!!