More adivce please!

Thank you very much to the people who have helped me so far! I think I addressed the issues that were suggested (and actually put the foamwork on my headblank this time). Would it be possible to get some feedback on my updated head? I'm still not sure how I feel about it. I still feel like something is off... maybe the beak is too long?



Please be aware that my head blank is not perfectly round and the base of it isn't flat, so the head is leaning a bit. Also, the balaclava is a bit baggy on top








Now for actually on my head!
I see that the lower left side of my jaw hangs open a little more, I THINK that's because it's not glued as far down as the other side is.








Here is a reference that is very similar to the look I'm going for, though it is not my reference personally.


The only thing I don't like abut the reference piece is the lower jaw, so I was going for a lower jaw structure more like this:


I really want this head to come out good, so feel free to critique hard! I'm hoping for the quality to be as good or almost as good) as the suit posted above.

Thank you!