Redline help?

It isn't really fursuit related, but i know there are a lot of people on here that are great at redlining. I really would love to make a giant toothless plush, and im having a hard time making the head, right now it looks more like the geico gecko than toothless. :P Im only really concerned about the side that is all markered up, but all input is greatly appreciated! If the mods want, i'll remove this post, but it would be great if i could get some help. :)

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